How to write a cover letter that gets read

Many cover letters say the same thing: that the writer is passionate, a team player, and excited about the opportunity. Readers skim past them. A letter that gets read is short, specific to this job, and makes one clear case: the work you have done matches the work they need done.

Keep it short

Three short paragraphs, under a page, often around 250 words. The reader already has your resume. The letter's job is to connect it to theirs, not to repeat it.

The structure

Paragraph one: the role, and the one-line case

Name the job, and say in one sentence why you are a fit, in terms of their needs:

I'm applying for the Senior Data Analyst role. For the last six years I've built the SQL and Power BI reporting insurance claims teams run on, which is the work your ad describes.

No "I am writing to express my interest". They know.

Paragraph two: the evidence

Pick the two or three things the ad cares about most, and for each, one specific example from your experience, with a result where you have one:

At Brightwater Insurance I rebuilt the monthly claims reporting in Power BI, now used by 40 managers, and cut its preparation from two days to two hours by moving spreadsheet steps into SQL views. I also trained six claims staff to build their own reports.

Specific beats impressive. A concrete example of something modest is more convincing than a broad claim.

Paragraph three: why them, and the close

One or two sentences on why this company or team, based on something real: what they do, a product, something in the ad. Then close plainly:

Your move to Snowflake is the kind of project I'd like to be part of. I'd welcome the chance to talk about how I could help.

And sign it with your name.

What to leave out

• Repeating your resume line by line.
• Adjectives about yourself: passionate, hard-working, detail-oriented. Show it with an example instead, or leave it out.
• Anything you cannot back up. If you mention a skill, be ready to talk about where you used it.
• Apologies for gaps ("Although I don't have…"). If a gap matters, address it positively and briefly, or let the interview handle it.
• A generic letter with the company name swapped. It is easy to spot.

Before you send it

• Address it to a person if the ad names one.
• Check the company name, the role title and the spelling of anyone's name.
• Read it aloud. If a sentence sounds like nobody would say it, rewrite it.
• Save it with the job, so you know what you sent when they call.

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